Seriously, as soon as I walked through the school I saw a man, the man had a big black rimmed hat, a black eye patch and red clothes. It flashed through my mind, a pirate. The pirate turned around and saw me, then he got a glass bottle out of his jacket. It had some brown liquid in it, he threw a drop at me it went through my mouth then I started to shrink and shrink and shrink until I was the size of an ant. I sprinted into the classroom (which was only really the speed of an old-fashioned granny)and ran to the Whāre Miere, the clock was on the wall where it normally was, it said 10 past 9. Wow it really took me that long to run to the entrance to here. “Writing time” Mr Sutherland said over the huge microphone. We all had boosts up to our trays, then heaved the massive books out and stood on the table with our stuff waiting for the teachers. I opened up my device and stood on the keys for my password, it took awhile because you had to jump up for the keys to go down because we didn't weigh anything. after writing it was reading and the same thing happened. Then for morning tea, wow the playground looks ginormous then the pirate exhaustively sneaked in the class and took out a circular book. “Who carries circular books around people only carry square shape books” I heard someone say “That book doesn’t look ordinary” I said. At that moment Ngawai jumped up onto the pirate, but he didn’t even notice then, she got out his bottle that had the brown liquid in from his jacket, after that she threw it in the air, I caught it and put it into the pen pocket in my bag, I went back into the crowd of people by this time Ngwai started to make her way down to have a look at the book. As soon as she touched it with a tip of her fingernail she started to grow and grow and grow until she was normal size. “What just happened” he walked over to and saw her “go away” he said letting anger going all over his face, as he let out this demand Ngwai turned around and put her hand on the ground everybody climbed on shouting “ you're our hero!” everyone fitted nicely on her hand (she was able to fit so many people on because they were tiny) The pirate ended up dropping the book of shock so, they all stood on the book and became normal size.
After that day, I went down to a science lab with the little glass bottle with the brown liquid in and showed sciencetist. They said that they had seen a bottle of that same liquid a decade ago near the docks.
Wow what a fun story, you are a budding author! Dad and I loved reading this, you have used great detail to describe the pirate. We are pleased you didn't stay ant size. Love ❤️ Mum
ReplyDeleteI like your story of the life of being a size of a ant, its a cool story, my favourite part is when the man had had a glass bottle and squirted it into your mouth and it made you small. You made a mistake in the title you said the life of being the size of a ant and you were supposed to say the life of being the size of an ant.
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